Monday, April 14, 2014


Kelsey Zimmerman

Ms. Anthony

English 101-103

14 April 2014

A Day at Yellowstone

Yellowstone National Park is a well known national park, people talk about it, travel, and venture to and from it all the time.  It is not just a national park, it's a place where countless memories can be made.  There are so many different occasions you can go there for, anniversaries, family vacation, or even just a little road trip.  You definitely get an awesome workout by walking up and down so many different trails to see waterfalls, wildlife and people that are just like you.  Yellowstone National Park is by far one of my favorite places I would like to see.  There are several ways that you can get there, you could take a bus, a plane, or you can just drive yourself.  I personally would end up driving, you have nothing but road that lies ahead of you and you get to see how different people, towns and cities really are.  When you’re in the country you see kids coming outside and playing as they eat their popsicles.  As your passing through the second you get into the country you can smell the fresh scent in the air, and quite often you smell the cow monure.  You hit the city and all you see are people walking, people getting held up in traffic, and you don’t see much of the kids.  When you take a deep breath, you can tell that it’s in the city because it doesn’t have that cleansing feel to it.  To observe so many different places with different people you really see how one thing could make a person significant.  The cool air keeps your car nice and cool and if it gets to cold you can simply turn it off, you control everything when you drive, and music is always a big thing for me I can’t live without it.  It’s a long drive so depending on the amount of monsters and coffee you have; you may end up having to stop in at a motel for a day.  If your smart and you think ahead, you could have someone riding with you and when you start getting tired you trade off and then when you wake up you’ll be at Yellowstone National Park, whereas if your not smart you may end up staying in one of those really creepy old hotels and you'll end up dead or something.  That last sentence was just a joke, but you probably will end up in a hotel that hasn't had the bedding washed in a month, with roaches and spiders all over the floor because you didn't even reserve a room at the better hotel and when you got there they were all booked.  When you arrive at Yellowstone you get to venture off on all sorts of different trails,   there are over 1,100 miles of hiking available.  You should check the forcast for the area you'll stay at for the night just in case there are going to be severe storms or something.  You have to be careful when you venture off alone into the woods because you can never tell what weather conditions are going to be like or how the wildlife is going to react.  Doing a little bit of research about Yellowstone, I actually found out that according to Jordan Fisher Smith, “between 1950 and 1974 1,060 people were injured by bears in Yellowstone, a symptom of an ecosystem out of balance.”  I personally think it’s a good idea to find out what type of animals are somewhere before I venture off so that if something does happen I know how to respond to it.  There are actually over 60 mammals that live in Yellowstone, they have bears, cats, dogs, raccoons, weasels, pika’s, hare’s, rabbits, beavers, squirrels, gophers, mice, porcupine, elk, bison, deer, moose, bats and a ton of others.  Yellowstone has a ton of different things you can do, you’ll never go bored!  I mean the fact that Yellowstone is actually resting on top of a volcano that has not erupted half a million years ago and that there are 2,221,766 acres has nothing to do with it.  The human history of the Yellowstone region goes back more than 11,000 years and it was the first national park Established on March 1, 1872. Yellowstone National Park is really significant to me because when I was around twelve years old my cousin started going on vacation there and he’d send us post cards through the mail with different animals on it.  My sisters and I use to always fight over who had the best post card.  We would always wait for him to get back and when he did he’d always have stuffed animals, shirts and he even got my mom a shot glass once, and that is how I learned about Yellowstone.  I feel like Yellowstone is such a beautiful place to see because it has so many different things about it like you can go hiking, take photos of some of the animals, there are souvenir shops, you can go see the waterfalls, just so many different things that you can do and it’ll all be worth it in the end.  Waterfalls are one of the biggest things for me because he always gave me the card with a really pretty waterfall on it, the sound of a waterfall is one of the prettiest sounds that I have ever heard.  The traditional use of the lands of Yellowstone dates back to over two hundred years ago.  Yellowstone is not just a national park, it is also used to help preserve and protect all sorts of different animals.  When your walking down the trails and you see those animals all that can come to your mind is how it is such a natural beauty.  When you take the time to actually go out hiking, camping and just capture memories with your loved ones.  All in all, Yellowstone is one of my favorite places to go because I mean it's not like it's just a national park it's also the memories you get to cherish, the new experiences, getting to know different animals, the absorption of nature and your surroundings and you may even find out something about yourself that you never knew. 

 

 

 

 

Friday, April 11, 2014

My Place Notes



 

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                                                        Work Cited

Melford, Michael "Yellowstone Park." National Geographic. Gary Knell,
        Time article published not listed. Web. 16 May 2014.
   < http://travel.nationalgeographic.com/travel/national-parks/yellowstone-national-park/>.

*Ebscohost was not accessible**

Name not Listed. "Article Title." Website Title. Yellowstone Media,
        1999-2013. Web. 16 May 2014.
        <http://www.yellowstonenationalpark.com/>.

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  • ·         Yellowstone National Park is really significant to me because when I was around twelve years old my cousin started going on vacation there and he’d send us post cards through the mail with different animals on it.  My sisters and I use to always fight over who had the best post card.  We would always wait for him to get back and when he did he’d always have stuffed animals, shirts and he even got my mom a shot glass once.  I haven’t really got to see much of yellow stone after I was fourteen because he ended up over dosing, but I have always said that I was going to go there so I could see what he once seen. 
  • ·   Human history of Yellowstone region goes back more than 11,000 years
  •   Traditional use of Yellowstone lands continued a little over 200 years ago
  • ·         1872 a country that had not yet seen its first centennial, established Yellowstone as the first nation park in the world.
  •  It was a new way for people to preserve and protect the best of what they had for the benefit.
  •    Established on March 1, 1872
  •   Size: 2,221,766 acres
  •     Most of the park rests on top of a slumbering colcano that erupted half a million years ago and is showing renewed energy.  Says  national geographic 
  •     Between 1950 and 1974 1060 people were injured by bears in Yellowstone, a symptom of an ecosystem out of balance. (EBSCO)

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Friday, April 4, 2014

He claims that there are no hidden fees, yet if you go over to the samples it's like 17.99 or something like that for 10 pages and 5 sources.  However, if you go to the pricing menu and you say you want 10 pages it's like 200 something dollars.  I don't understand why they would say there are no hidden fees or anything, personally I think that the people who use this are stupid, yeah I understand some people procrastinate and then freak out but I've done that before and wrote a three page paper within 5 hours.  It doesn't take that long to write a paper, you print out your sources go through highlight what you like out of there points take that information and write your OWN paper.  A lot of teachers can understand the students writing styles especially toward the end.  My question is, do they use big words?  Small words?  Big vocabulary?  Small Vocabulary?  All students are different some may say that a dog is a nuisance and then some may say that they are stupid aiming toward the same point but different wording, if I were a teacher and someone started using big words like that out of nowhere I would be like what is going on with this student?  Obviously the majority of students aren't going to read a dictionary and suddenly get a huge education with a huge vocabulary.  I don't really think getting your paper written for you is the smartest thing in the world to do I mean yeah there could be perks with it, you don't have to do any writing, you don't have to do anything really.  But when you do that, your literally learning nothing and you'll need those skills for later.  No matter what job you are in you HAVE to know how to write a professional paper and everything, I mean when your out in the world if you get really high up you need to be knowledgeable with how you teach your co-workers that are working alongside you.  Sometimes you may have to do a speech, you have to learn how to get people skills and when your going off getting your paper written for you, your not receiving any further education which is literally what you are paying for.  You need to do things so that you can learn not someone else, yeah you may go through and read the paper making sure it's to your liking but I bet some people don't even do that.  You'd probably just skim through it and then be like alright good enough and then all of that information goes straight out, when your actually researching the material it actually sticks after that, or that's how it is for me.  I can't just skim through something because then it never sticks in my head I have to read it several times to remember it.  I just think that it's really stupid to do something like that, it's just like they are being so lazy to even actually care about their education.  That and not to mention, I am in Culinary two classes this semester and we have to write papers, the degree I want to go for and you still have to write papers.  Papers are everywhere and the more you avoid them the more they pop up it seems.  Not to mention pretty much everyone has one word they say a lot throughout their writing, I use to say like all the time I still type it but I've kind of gotten rid of it.